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story 3. crash and crosser: the park of chaos


this story carries on from coco bandicoot: machine rise and please tell me what you think of it.

After the Viruse ship crash on the moon and has suffer the defeat from Crosser Dog mega space phoenix mech, no one heard any new threats from Viruse forces and in the bandicoots and C.D mind that they believe that they seen the last of the machine empire.
While on the moon not far from the wreck ship. A super android call Angelcon was trap on the moon ever since the dinosaurs ruled the earth and found a cave where Viruse other imprisonment body is being held but couldnt get the laptop because their a force field that is protecting it and he try to retrieve the laptop but fail endlessly and when he sear the ship crash near by, he ran to the wreck ship to find anything to help him to retrieve the laptop. Angelcon look and look and so far nothing but scrape and broken weapons. He reaches the control room where Crosser Dog and Viruse meet face to face before they space roaring battle. Angelcon continuo looking for anything that would help him to retrieve the laptop and release the entire house of gadgetry but then the room light up and Angelcon sear a pair red, glowing eyes and sear the whole figure of Viruse head itself. Viruse was very angry that he lost to crosser dog and his ship was destroy when crash landed on the moon and havent found his other body which is trap in the other black laptop.
Angelcon told his lord (which is Viruse of course) where the black laptop is but he also told him that he try to get it for him but couldnt because of a force field to all of those V-androids. Viruse told him to take him to the cave so he will himself get his body back that is trap in the black laptop by unknown. When they reach the cave, Viruse blasted the cave with his heat vision and not only destroy the cave but also destroy the black laptop which release the rest of the machine empire and the body of Viruse.
While back on earth, Rocket just finish rebuild him and was given instructions from Viruse for him to follow.
At sanity island, crash, coco and crunch are with unknown in the machine kingdom checking how things are going while C.D just finish his room in a metal tree that he made that connects to the bandicoot home. He landed on his bed with tiredness when working on his room without rest and slowly shutting eyes when he heard a man outside the house. so he look out the window trying not to show as much of his face while looking outside of his window and see a weird looking science man (Dr neo cortex) that is a short distance from the bandicoot home and with him are another guy that has a missile fuse with his head (Dr n gin), a Goth teenager girl (Nina cortex), and a big tiger wearing army clothing (tiny the tiger) and other villains from crash past.
C.D grab a picture that look that was given by crash and coco what they look like. He notice that the people outside are the ones in the photo are bandicoots enemy c.d got ready to defend the place for his fellow friends.
Cortex told all of his fellow minions to get ready to attack the bandicoots and their home (cortex thinks that the bandicoots are inside the house) and just before he declare the attack, fire pistil fired out of nowhere and miss cortex by an inch and continued to fire at them. All of them are dodging the fired pistils then someone sear where they are being fired from and tiny throw a big boulder at the gunman and crosser dog fell out of his tree and all of them look at him with surprise and embarrass. C.D got back on his feet and digodile use his flamethrower to frost c.d and after the smoke clear, more surprise and embarrass to them that to see C.D with a stick with a toasted marshmallow due digodile idea of frosted him.
He said to the cortex groupies I bet you lot that by the time I finished chewing and swallow this marshmallow, you all will be defeated (he didnt mean hell take on cortex only his minions).
He put the marshmallow in his mouth and one by one cortex recruited evil army are being defeated and he even summon three giant robots to take C.D to necro land but they too fail for results to take him down (after those three, he defeated cortex minions and finish chewing the frosted marshmallow and swallow it).
Cortex forces for beaten and he was defenseless and C.D was going after him next but a couple of missiles aim at C.D and one of those missile went right to his face which distracted him long enough for all of cortex minions and himself to retreat back to cortex castle. C.D regain his eye-sight and the first thing he think he sear is rocket, the super android that he first battle from the machine empire (the image was blurry at that point so it could of bin rocket)
C.D rubbed his eyes and open his eyes again and this time he can see properly and the image he once sear a few seconds ago was no longer their.
Shortly after cortex forces fled, unknown, crash, coco and crunch return from the machine kingdom and sear the place cover with robots parts, bullets and burn marks and they are look at c.d and unknown said to him what happen here, crosser dog?
C.D reply well, cortex and his minions was going to ambush crash, coco and crunch but as you know, they where with you so we ending up fighting and I was the victor but the strangest thing was that when I was going to make cortex R.I.P but one missile aimed right into my face and when I open my eyes, I thought I sear Rocket.
Everyone was silent for a moment and crunch said to him you mean the same Rocket that me and crash fought against him and Kooler at that mountain lab
C.D nodded his head and they thought they sear the last of the machine empire warriors. Then C.D just remember about something and to tell the group that he had to do something imported to do and told the group not to follow him.
Everyone was puzzled about what he had to do. Unknown told the bandicoots that they can watch him from the satellite he made and install a big plasma T.V and everyone gone in and is ready to see what is doing.
Meanwhile, C.D made it to the mountain base where his life change of ever. He went in looking for the forth super android that was created but wasnt activated for some reason. Then he heard an explosive near where the meta chamber is and ran to see if it was activated.
When he reach the chamber, he sees an android that has a nearly human like-shape but with 2 gears sticking out near his neck, one for each side, a skull face on his chest with a yellow circle around the mark (his face I can not describe because I cant find the words for his face describing).
In C.D view, the green android has no idea what he is or where he is. He try to talk to the scared android but he wasnt listening to c.d. so he deactivated the scared android and took him back to unknown base.
Coco and crunch didnt understand why he just did, crash was chewing on a monkey ranch for some weird reasons and unknown knew why he did that.
Later they meet up with C.D in unknown lab. Coco and crunch ask him why he took the green android (coco ask sweetly and crunch ask him in a Mr.T style), before c.d could respond to the both of them, unknown walk into the room and answered there question the reason crosser dog took the last android from mountain base because he doesnt like to see someone to suffer the same way that he suffered.
They both look at c.d and he looking down with sadness for seeing someone else going through what he bin through. Coco fill sorry for c.d and said to him oh, I didnt know you felt like this c, come here. coco gave c.d a cuddle.
Crunch turn to unknown asking what he is going to do with the stolen android.
Unknown reply to crunch his computer brain wasnt affected by Viruse little virus so I think he can be on our side and I name him GRIMLOCK since he hasnt got a name.
The android woke from his reprogramming and sear crash, coco, crunch crosser dog and unknown and hasnt got the idea of what to say or do.
Unknown explain to Grimlock from who created him, why he was still there and why he is here. Grimlock know why things were so strange to him and decided to join the bandicoots and help them in anyway and they are happy about that.
Meanwhile at cortex island in his high, dark, twisted castle. He and henchmen are recovering the defeat they had suffer. Dr n gin come into the room with ice packs for the pain. Cortex told n gin those three giant robots where worthless against some weird teenage cyborg with purple hair. Dr n gin thought for a second what cyborg had purple hair. Then BANG!
The room that all of cortex henchmen, the wall was broken through by a giant robot that a similar look to the one that n gin pilot when he was on Viruse side but its a hunting model and the one who is piloting is Rocket. Know to collect some goods. for America rocket said. Swiping everybody, even n gin. He took the capture prisoners to the machine empire castle that on the dark side of the moon. Rocket took them to the room were the machine king of the machine empire is. they all were free out the giant robot hunter clutches and found that the room was pitch black and cant see anything. then the room burst with light and they sear many gears, wired and other gadgetry in the room and what caught their eyes the most were the throne that was being sat on by a giant black robot that has three spicks each on his shoulders, three on each side near his neck and a big gray v letter on chest and other objects were on his chest like part of a cyber skull and other things. and just appeared from a dark purple energy sphere was the head of VIRUSE! The machine king of the machine empire and the head reattach to his body and he was back big time.
N gin is panicking to see Viruse again after leaving his empire after he thought that Viruse was destroyed in that battle with crosser dog and this time he in the same room with Viruse with his body and Dr cortex.


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Next to his mountain like throne is Angelcon and on the other side of his throne great angus, Viruse right-hand robot. A machine that has a skull like face on his entire chest and has a gear in his back that always rotate and has a mean looking face also, carrying around him is weapon staff.
Viruse look down at the group and said which one of is Dr. Neo cortex?
Cortex answer that question Im Dr neo cortex and who are you? He Viruse, machine king of the machine empire n gin quickly told cortex.
Viruse spotted n gin and swiftly grabbed both cortex and n gin with both of his giant, life crushing hands and brought the both of them right near his face and he said you cortex, you are to blame for my defeat when I was trying take over earth what do you mean its my fault it you were defeated youre the one who created the bandicoots and unknown, my counter part guiding them and that what stop me this time Im always being defeated by crash bandicoot and . Viruse butted in I already capture the two male bandicoots by my super androids, it was coco who manage to steal of my super android and got to unknown and team up with him with crosser dog and that when my plan was being ruin he said in anger. Viruse show them a holographic image of unknown and crosser dog. everyone never sear unknown but, they differently remember what crosser dog look like know because that the purple hair android they encounter earlier today.
That the purple haired cyborg that we encounter today! cortex said with shock.
Viruse turn his attention to n gin and gave him the glare and said and you! N gin, you thought you can go back to cortex side after the machine empire bin defeated once, right I didnt know that you were still around and sear the spaceship crash on the moon and I thought the machine empire was no more n gin reply in fear. Cortex quickly turn to n gin and shouted what?! N gin what wear you thinking leaving my side and join his
ENOUGH! Viruse roared. Im giving you a choice to either join my side or not Viruse said. Cortex reply what if we dont want to join your empire
Then you lot will be enslave when I concur earth Viruse answered cortex question. They all quickly join Viruse side, even cortex. Viruse knew that they would join his side. Viruse already gave them their first orders know your first order is to go and get the super android that I left at the mountain by accident so go their and collect it for me, n gin will know where it is
He teleported them mountain base and began to search for the super android.
Later on n gin told him that the super android was gone. When Viruse heard of this, he got angry so much that he stood up and steam were coming out of the side of his head and sparks were shooting right out of the top of his head and shouted I CANT BELIEVE WHAT I JUST BIN TOLD! WHO DARE STEAL MY CREATIONS! the thought for a second and now know who stole his creation. Unknown.
He thought of a plane of how he could his creation back and get his revenge on unknown, the bandicoots and especially crosser dog.
Meanwhile at sanity island, crosser dog and coco is making radios for everyone to listen to when they are bored. They tested the first one and it work, but they toned into the news and heard very bad news at Von Clutch motor world that monsters had taken over the theme park.
Coco and crosser dog gone and told unknown about what they heard on the radio. Unknown was surprise about the news they heard and got crash, coco, crunch, crosser dog and grimlock to investigate these monsters that terrain the motor world theme park and sort them out while he can carry on his secret project. They got teleported to the park and made their way onto vouch clutch office.
Von clutch was worrying like hell since the monsters had invade the park, then the group came in and he was relief that the bandicoots came and help with his problem and notice there an android and a cyborg (which is crosser dog look like to von clutch).
Crosser spoke how did the monster got in the park in the first place von clutch took a closer look and said hhmmm is that you, crosser dog? saying it in a confusion way yes it me. It been ages since you and I meet after the complete construction of your motor world amusement park
What do mean after complete construction crunch said to crosser dog. Crosser dog replied to crunch question. von clutch needed someone to build his dream theme park so he heard about me and my charity service and he gave me a ring and ask me to build the motor world theme park for him. It took a week to construct it with the speed and progress of the construction robots and in return he gave me a life time free pass to the park anytime with some friends.
Yes, that is all true, Know about the monsters that are in my park, terror rising my customers
Coco ask him how did the monsters got in the park anyway (a similar question that was said by crosser dog but von clutch only listen to his voice since it sound very similar to him). He told them all there were four monsters that was lead in and gone the other theme world by this wield looking person with a face on his entire chest and they taken the power gems with them. When crosser dog heard that there was a face on his chest, he thought only one person who has that. He ask von clutch von clutch, did this person chest face has a depression face, tears drops image from the eyes and has a black V symbol on his original four-head von clutch said yes to all three and there were an evil laugh outside the office of von clutch. Everyone came to the see through window and sear the one, the only BOOHOO THE CLOWN! Everybody wear shock to see him and von clutch said that the fiend who lead those monsters in my park. crosser dog told everyone to stand clear of the see through window, then ran through the window and falling on his feet after jumping of a couple of stories high and sear boohoo standing right there in front of him.
it bin ages since we met at sanity island, eh crosser dog? the clown said with a chuckle when I get my titanium hands on you, there wont be enough of you to sweep up crosser dog said in anger. You have to catch me first boohoo laugh again with a eviler chucker and ran off to the pyrite part of the park. Crosser dog ran after him shouting in anger you get back here, you coward! he ran after him into the water part of the park. Back at von clutch office. Coco told crash Crash! go and follow crosser dog if he needs help. crash went out of von clutch office with a big grin and followed crosser to the water part of the park. Von clutch said to both coco and crunch why do crosser dog hate that clown so much anyway? crunch hasnt got the slightest idea why and coco said boohoo was the one that change C life and his body image and want revenge for that it made more senses to von clutch and thought if thing couldnt get any worse then it already is.
Crash follow crosser dog and boohoo into the same theme section the park as they did. He battle ninja penguins, traps and sear crosser dog and walk to him look at a door that wasnt there before. He went here but the door wont open unless 5 power crystals are insert in these slot holes, then the door will open C.D said to crash when he caught up with him. They both gone and try to find five power crystal and after a couple of minutes both of manage to collect the five power crystal they needed to open the door with a skull picture on it. They insert the crystals into their slot one at a time. After the fifth and last power crystal was inserted, the door open up and their sear a tunnel and both of them went through the tunnel and sear a huge treasure chest that was on a bigger circle island and around it was a ring of water that cut of the path to the big treasure chest. They both look at the chest and something caught crash eye. A crown that is made of pure gold and had little gems on it and it was hanging off the mondo chest and crash went to it and try to grab the golden crown. Crosser dog was still looking at the giant chest thinking to himself how does this giant chest has to do with boohoo then he sear crash getting to close to the chest an he shouted out to him CRASH! GET BACK HERE. YOU DONT KNOW WHATS INSIDE OF THAT CHEST! but crash didnt listen to crosser dog, he too distracted by the crown to listen to anyone.
Crash is a few steps away from the giant chest but the closer that he get to it, the louder a mysterious sound got. Then the chest open by itself but a moment after crash and crosser dog watch it open, a skeleton
Like monster pop out of chest like a jack-in-a-box and crash was scared by the surprise appears of the monster so much that he ran back were crosser was standing when they entered. Crosser dog on the other hand was scared a bit do to the surprise of the monster hiding in the chest and sear one of the power gems that was stole and told crash crash. Im going to through you at the monster four-head and youll grab the power gem and jump done and well take him down. Alright? crash reply with his blah, blah, blah or something and crosser dog reply to what crash said ..I have no idea what you just said crash. crash just keep smiling. Crosser dog grab crash arm and spin him around a couple of time and let go of his arm and crash went flying and still smiling with his tongue hanging out of his mouth and did a power impact on the skeleton skull were the power gem is. Got back on his two feet and grab the gem and jump out of the monster head and landed on the treasure that is in the mondo chest and sear the crown and quickly grab that as well but when he try to, the giant skeleton monster spotted crash and try and grab him with his left arm but crosser dog fired at the chest that caught the monster attaching long enough for crash to escape the monster with the power gem and surprise to c.d that he got the gold crown that him


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this zombie chest here crash gave c.d a thumps up and ran off of. The monster shot crosser dog when he wasnt looking with his right arm that is shape like a hand cannon. C.d was a damage a bit but didnt stop him to the monster chest. CRASH! Go and take the gem to von clutch, Ill take care of o fight back. The monster fired at crosser dog, but after the smoke was clear the body wasnt their and the monster was wondering what had happen to the body. Crosser dog reappeared from the shadow of the monster and got out his sword and jump high and slice the monster in half and watch the monster blow up from a safe distance and the monster exploded and it were raining jewels and crosser watch the jewel falling from the sky and the one thing that caught his eye was a small ring that had all the colour of the rainbow and pick up the ring and thought I never seen a ring like this before. I better hold on to this just incase. he held on to the ring and went back and met up with others that are waiting for them in the middle of the park.
He sear the others and coco said how did you do with the first monster, c? well it wasnt as fun as I hope but it one less to worried about crosser said to coco. ah good. Crash already put the power gem back where it belong. I had to close the park to prevent anyone else to get hurt von clutch said to crash, coco, crunch, crosser dog and grimlock. Coco wanted to talk to crosser dog in private. Everyone went to the fairytale land part of the theme park. crash told me that you didnt understand what he said when you two were sorting out the monster issue yes that true and does this bother you in anyway at all? just a little. Its just that if he had something important to say to you I guess it does matter when you say it like that coco. But how do I meant to understand crash? Ill make a small gadget to fix that, ok. they both quickly kiss and went to the fairytale section of the park. Everyone else was waiting for crosser dog and coco at the entrance. Everyone were thinking who should go in this time to retrieve the power gem and destroy the monster who in that section. Before anyone could say who should go, giant plasma vines came out of the door and grab crosser dog and von clutch and took them both into the park. Von clutch try to break free from the plasma vine and crosser dog could broke free but didnt trying because he wanted to go. The plasma vines took both of them and then shut the gate tightly with more plasma vine and these vines has razor-sharp thorns to avoid anyone else coming in. the vines throw both von clutch and crosser dog on to the ground and those vine them shut the gate tight on that side as well. They both got up and sear what had happen to the fairytale section. rather being something from a fairytale book, they both see the place turn into something that is from the underworld. its the exact opposite, ninja penguin turn into big rock reptiles of all sort. Von clutch said I cant believe what happen to my beloved park. We must find the monster and kill it to turn things back as they were. crosser dog agree and look up for no reason and sear a flying rock platform and said von clutch look. pointing his finger at the hovering platform and von clutch look up at it the monster and the power gem must be up there. if we can just get up there somehow, we can destroy the monster, get the power gem and restore this section of the place. crosser dog explain to von clutch. They both search for something that would get them from the ground and to the hovering platform. They found a teleport machine but cant used it because it need 7 power crystal to power it. Von clutch took 2 crystals out of his pockets and c.d took 3 out of his pockets. They only have 5 power crystals and they need 2 more to make 7 and have enough to power up the teleport machine. Then they think where they could the other 2 power crystal from. Then two giant size, rock cobra came out of nowhere and spook the two of them so much that they jump back a couple of meters back and sear how big they were and they both sear a power crystal sticking out of both rock cobra heads and they wear guarding the teleport machine.
crosser dog decided to bash them into pebbles and von clutch of decided to shooting them with his hand laser gun. The rock cobras came after both of them. Crosser charge at one of them and punch one right through and then jump up right on top of it and punch hard through the cobra head and it started to crack and crosser dog quickly grab the power crystal and then stomp on his head and jump off just to see it crumble. von clutch flee to a safe place to fire at one remaining one but couldnt and fell over and the cobra monster catch up to him and about to swallow him until it tail was grab by crosser dog and he shouted to von clutch KNOW! SHOOT AT IT WHILE IT NOT PAYING ANY ATTANCHING TO YOU. von clutch got out his laser gun and power up and shot of the cobra head off and crosser just pick by the remaining body and slam it down to the ground, destroying the headless cobra monster and got the last crystal they needed and put all 7 power crystals in the slot and enter the machine and got teleported right on the flotation rock platform.
in the center of the platform, their was a broken doll and next to it there were a ripe teddy bear and a lion head and a dead shark. The sky turn well dark and lighting bolts were striking down on to the platform and one of the bolts struck the doll and other thing and reform into a well ugly doll monster. It was 7 foot tall, it has a body of that broken doll, on it chest has a lion head, right arm as a shark and on the left arm has a bear head.
half of the doll head is missing and the power gem inside his head. Crosser dog and von clutch had their work cut out this time because they dont want to damage the power gem. They didnt know what to do about the gem and the chimera doll breath fire out of his loin mouth, shot water stream out of the shark mouth and fire big rocks from the bear mouth at both of them. Luckily both of them move in time to avoid the tri attack from the chimera doll monster and lighting bolts were still about and another one struck the monster head. both of them notice that the gem has a forced field around it and was protected from the lighting bolts that just struck the monster head so they dont have to worry about damaging the gem, they can go ahead and attack the chimera doll. Crosser dog and von clutch ran the opposite direction until they between the monster and attack it. Crosser dog fired at the doll only eye ball hoping it cant see but didnt harm it. Von clutch fired as well but at the loin head and still nothing. They couldnt believe that laser attacks are useless against this monster. then crosser dog gone and try a power punch and right when his fist was close enough to punch it, another lighting bolt struck again but this time it was c.d which somehow power him up and when the punch connected to the chimera doll face, the doll suffer some damage from the punch and fell backward. Von clutch and crosser dog notice the power up from the lighting bolts which somehow boosts their physical attacks and decide to get struck by it on purpose just to get a power boost well, c.d anyway because von clutch can just distract the chimera doll monster while crosser dog can just wait for the closest lighting bolt and become the target to get power boost up and attack the monster.
They did this a couple of times and started to see the chimera doll to fall a part bit by bit and during one of those attacks, the power gem came out of the doll broken head and von clutch caught it. crosser dog again got struck by lighting for that power boost and kick the so hard that it fell off the platform and since it was very high up, the chimera shattered to a million of pieces when it hit the hard ground. Both von clutch and crosser dog watch the monster fall and when it hit the ground, crosser dog said where on earth does boohoo find these monster? we better go and get to the next section of the park Von clutch said to crosser dog. The platform slowly came down and was low enough for von clutch and crosser dog to jump off from and just when crosser dog walk by the rubble of the chimera doll, he heard a little girl laugh and turn around and sear no one around and thought to himself okthat was strange and caught up with von clutch at the gate and sear the plasma vines that was covering the door had disappear and they were free and before he got out of the fairytale part, a small insect robot that is shape as a fly had attach to his back and sat in the place where the Ra stone is place in his body and crosser dog didnt notice the fly robot. They got out of the fairytale nightmare and met up with the others.
Crash and crunch guarded von clutch when he put the two power gems they recover so far to a safe place while coco, crosser dog and grimlock is telling unknown through a transmitter about what had happen so far in motor world and the unexpected had just happen. A machine monster with razor-sharp claws just dig his claws through the same spot that the fly robot is and cause it to exploded, making a surprising hole through crosser dog pure titanium armor and grab the dangerous stone of Ra. Coco and grimlock were in shock and try to fight the nameless android to win back the Ra stone but he didnt let go of the it and then other surprise have arrive. the same desert android that crosser dog and coco sear last time had came out of the ground and the mysterious android had used it to escape with the Ra stone. Grimlock try to stop the desert android but it just dive underground. Coco was panicking like crazy and unknown was still on the transmitter and coco told him what just happen and he teleported to the theme park and sear the damage and was shock and quickly repair the damage the android cause to c.d and coco was


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worrying about how he can function with the stone of Ra to power him up. After 5-10 minutes, unknown had just finish repairing crosser dog armor and replace the stone of Ra with the stone of pah, the moon god.
C.d was coming around and said what happen? The last thing I remember is thinking of what the next monster would be and then I was shutdown. Coco was relief that c.d is ok and she hug him and said your alright you really know how to stay strong with out your power stone grimlock said to crosser dog. C.d didnt believe what he just heard what do you my power stone is gone your stone was taken by a weird looking android with razor-sharp claws and slash through your body and took your Ra stone. Me and grimlock try to get it back but then the desert android came and crosser dog interrupt coco and he heard desert android you mean the slug thing that we encounter in the desert when we were on that quest to take down the machine empire? yes and he used that as his escape root and still got the stone. at least you try and get it back for me. and both of them cuddled and crash, crunch and von clutch came back and sear unknown and crunch said it nice to see you hear, unknown. I had to fix crosser dog a bit and since Im I might as well give you these. unknown gave crash, coco, and crunch a special wrist band with a button with a dragon face on it. know, these bands are something I bin working on and will come in handy only in extreme emergency, the button will lit up and you must press it when lit. unknown explain to the bandicoots but grimlock ask unknown what will happen if they do press that button when lit everyone is wondering about that and unknown reply you have to what and see. It a surprise. unknown left and crosser dog wanted coco and grimlock to come with him and help him with the dinosaurs theme world.
They gone in and sear the entire place is turn into a swamp land instead of a dinosaur world. They travel to the other side where the ice age would had bin and sear a huge dome and heard a mighty scary roar that kind of frighten coco a bit. Crosser dog sear the fear in her eyes somehow got stronger from it. He shock his head and coco said to crosser dog are you alright C? yeah just space out for a second that all c.d reply to coco. They sear another power crystal and crosser was getting annoyed about it and sear slots and need 12 power crystals to bring the dome down. Grimlock has 1. Coco has 6 and crosser has 1 also. They sear plenty of power crystals in the swamp water and crosser and grimlock collected as many crystals as possible and has 20 and use only 4 to open the dome and put the other 16 with crosser dog. The dome was gone and only sear only a mondo swamp lake and cliffs and on one of them was the third power gem. Grimlock was about to climb the rocky cliffs until a huge sea monster came out of the swamp lake and coco, crosser dog and grimlock were jumped by the monster appearances that they jump back a couple of meters and took a proper look at the monster and wear shock of what the sea monster is. its nessy, the lockness monster that was known in Scotland. Coco sear the armor it were wearing and said the armor it wearing is somehow controlling nessy I say we brake off its armor and free this nessy that you speak of that grimlock suggested and crosser dog kind of agree with idea and said sound good but we need to attack it from all sides to prevent getting into nessy mouth. he gave coco his sword and coco said why are you giving me your sword?. Its to help you defend against the brainwash nessy coco knew the real reason why and didnt plan to use the sword. Grimlock and crosser dog went and attack it armor and coco put the sword crosser dog gave and stuck the sword to the ground proving that she not a wimp that need a weapon to fight and gone and went round the same direction as grimlock so crosser dog wouldnt see that she didnt carry the sword around and nessy was so big that no one could see the other side of nessy. Crosser dog fired at the armor but no luck and he was tail wipe to wear his sword is and sear his sword and wondering where coco is. He couldnt see her until he sees her on the back of nessy. she is trying to open the armor but no luck. She was trying so hard to impress c.d but then, nessy used it tail and wrap coco and had her facing the monster face to face and coco was scared of what nessy was thinking. Then nessy throw coco into it mouth and swallow her whole. Crosser dog just watch as the only girl he ever fell in love was gone. He sat their on his knees as he thinks it his fault that coco is gone. Grimlock look at crosser dog and felt sorry for him. Crosser dog was about go berserk on nessy for eaten coco but then he sees nessy choking and sear coco hanging on to it tonsils and the monster was in hell. Crosser dog quickly race to nessy mouth and held it open and grab coco from the nessy tonsils and quickly took a distance and grimlock went for the back of nessy neck and ripe the wires that were connected to nessy helmet and free it from both it brainwash and the armor that was controlling it and he got nessy to grab the power gem from the cliffs and gone and catch up with crosser dog and coco.
Coco was getting the muck off of her and said I was pretty scared back there and stuff but I guess that what crash kind of went through when he save the world many times. dont you agree C. c? she turn around and sear him looking down at his sword and couldnt say a thing after what he just witness. Coco walk over and sat next to him. c? are you feeling alright? he slowly look at her and said ..I thought I lost you when. he wouldnt even dares say the words that would describe the events that just happen. Coco ended up telling him the truth of why she didnt used the sword. the reason why didnt used your sword is that I felt like your treating me like I cant defend myself. crosser dog look at her and said the reason why I gave you my sword is for you to used it to protect from the nessy mouth but (this when he feel better) I was impress that not only your a ace fighter with a lot of courage but you manage to escape a monster mouth. he smile and hug coco and she hug back with happiness.
Grimlock finally found both of them and told them finally! I found you two. we have to get out of here and go and give this to von clutch. coco and crosser dog gone out with grimlock and got out of the dinosaurs part. They gave von clutch his power gem and he took it to the safe place where he put his other power gems. Coco was tired from what she bin through. Crosser dog knew that she is pretty tough and told grimlock grimlock. Can you look after coco and von clutch while me, crash and crunch go to the Egypt theme part? yeah no swat. After what you just sear, you must be still freak out grimlock said to crosser dog. yeah. Im still no over that yet but I should be over it soon. crosser dog said to grimlock in reply. then he went and collect crash and crunch and went to the Egypt part of the theme park. They sear nothing change and in front of them, the last monster. it has the shape of a coffin, has one eye, has a similar look on his head and has two swords on his coffin chest. that was easy to find this monster crunch said but the monster chuckled and they didnt like it one bit. The tomb walker monster spoke your so close but yet so far. three of didnt know what he meant by that. Then a giant trap door was sprung underneath all three and fell two stories down and landed hard on each other and they know understand by what he meant by so close but yet so far. they got up from the fall and took a look around and sear another gate and another slot that need 20 power crystals but before they took out their the power crystals they need, crosser dog just blast the gate down then bash it until it was gone which didnt took so long. I really got sick of these special gates c.d said after he demolish the gate. They went through the destroyed gate and sear a trampoline and jump high enough and got back where they sear the tomb walker and sear that he was gone and crunch said to crash and crosser dog that turkey must of have went into the center of the park if he went out there, then why are his footprint going to a different direction. c.d said pointing to the foot print. They follow the tomb walker and found him in the maze that was there the last time they were here (except crosser dog, he wasnt there at the time). This time there were very little ground to fight on. Crosser dog said to both crash and crunch you two go back to the entrance and you get all the action, hah no way crunch said do to his reaction to those words and crosser dog reply back I wouldnt wont to have all the action. crosser wink at both of them and took his word and gone back to the entrance. The tomb walker fire his sand bombs at c.d but he dodge them and sear less ground were turn into quick sand and knew he had to work fast. So he jump to one block to another and the monster still firing his sand bombs trying to hit him but still keep missing. C.d made it on to the same surface as tomb walker and grab his foot and spun him around so many times that he was lifted from the ground and still being spin around. He was high enough for crosser dog to let go and see him fly to the entrance where he will meet crash and crunch and decided to join the fight and went back to the entrance to meet up crash and crunch.
Back the entrance, the monster landed in front of the entrance and crash and crunch were ready and the tomb walker charge at the two bandicoots where he were standing. Crash spin and crunch punched the monster at once but no


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affect on it. They kept attacking tomb walker with different attacks but still didnt affected the monster one bit. The monster laugh at the attacks and punches both of them and fell backwards do to the punch and tomb walker was about to stomp on crash face until crosser dog manage to get their and swiftly through his sword at the side of the monster head and it took a couple of steps back and sear the monster weakness and c.d ran to tomb walker and stole the two swords that were on his chest and toss them to crash and crunch and told them used those swords to fight back!. crash and crunch got up and used the swords and attack tomb walker body and quickly defeating him. The monster tried to fight back but couldnt keep up with both of them with crash spin attack while holding a sword and crunch keep stabbing it with his sword. The tomb walker was barely able to fight any longer and crosser dog fired at it, causing it to fell and exploded. Then the two swords that crosser dog took from the tomb walker fuse and become the last power gem and crash grab it and took it to von clutch.
they found the rest of the group and gave the last power gem to von clutch and he quickly put it with the others and wanted to thank them but.
The sky turn as dark as it would on a dark stormy nights and lighting and down in front of them and started to form something and shortly, the figure was Viruse and they this is the first time the bandicoots and crosser dog sear him with his proper body and this is the first time for von clutch see this dark android. Everyone were shockingly surprise to see Viruse again and he found his body and that means that he can cause some serious damage.
Crosser dog glare at Viruse for he put him through and ran tours to him and attack him, but was knock back by Viruse ancient fist and quickly got back up. hahaha! I must say that Im am amaze that you not only recover the power gems but defeats my monsters as well Viruse said to all of them. so you must be the one who left me at the mountain grimlock said to the dark android. yes and you are coming back to me grimlock!. not likely because He already know what side to be on and it our side coco said to Viruse with a glare. I want you to fix the damage you already cause with your monsters von cutch demanded to the mighty Viruse. Viruse shot von clutch with and energy beam from his fingers and ended up destroying him and watching his parts rain from the sky.
The bandicoots and crosser dog hand witness a friend demise right in front of them and his remaining parts scattered across the park. They all glare at Viruse with hatred and knew they couldnt do a thing about it. The dark android grab something from his back and was holding parts that look familiar to the bandicoots and crosser until Viruse drop the two pieces on the ground and took form quickly form and they were the two super android that gave the groups a hard time. that impossible! Me and C destroy those two before coco said in shock. well, I believe you bandicoots have some catching up to do Viruse said and teleported both the bandicoots and the two super android to a forest not isnt for away from the race park. Crosser dog shouted at Viruse WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH THEM VIRUSE?! dont worry about your friends, you should worry more about yourself Viruse said with a eviler look. Crosser dog still glare at him with rage. Grimlock glare at him too. then Viruse launch his fist at grimlock head, grab it and put his fist in reverse with grimlock in his clutches and as soon his fist was reconnected, he started to affected grimlock with a virus that would change him from good to evil. C.d could only watch as a friend was being brainwashed into a mindless destructive war machine.
Grimlock was finally completely affection by the virus and his eyes turn as red as the flames of the underworld and was hungry for fighting and sear crosser dog and gone to deliver the first attack on him. Crosser dog got hit and was knockdown and quickly got back up and said I got no choice but to take you apart. the both of them started to fight.
Meanwhile, in the forest that Viruse teleported crash, coco, crunch, rocket and kooler to fight. Kooler charge at the bandicoots with his giant axe like weapon and swing for them but they miss it by a horse nose and try to fight back. Rocket quickly join the fight and he fire energy beams and that to nearly hit them too. Rocket just went for the physical assault for crash and punches him right in the gut and crash fell to the ground since crash wasnt used to pain as his enemy. Rocket was about to step on him until crunch grab and toss him a couple of meters and watch him harshly land. Coco and kooler fought each other properly and was a fight it was. Coco kick his arm that had his weapon and flew out of his grip. He then open his mouth and cold, icy fog quickly came out and coco was cold which made her struggle to fight back. Kooler fired laser beams from his eyes and she luckily enough to avoid the laser beams and gone and trip kooler onto his back and she did a power stomp on the orb that is on kooler chest and destroyed it, causing him to shut down. Crunch quickly came over and toss kooler as far as he could and both of them gone and help crash to defeat rocket.
Back at the war zone theme park, both grimlock and crosser dog were beating each other. Grimlock pick up the thing with the turtles and toss it at crosser dog and landed on him but a second later the turtle thing was destroyed by the rage crosser dog. Those two still threw everything they had at one another.
Back at the forest, all three heroic bandicoots are battling the dangerous rocket and attacking from all side and trying their best not to get hit by his missiles. Rocket wasnt easily being defeated but soon he was struggling to fight all three at different time and from all sides. He even try to fire lots of missiles at them but they still avoided his missiles and for the three bandicoots final attack, they stand in a triangle (similar in Beetles Borgs against Borg slayer) and attack him. First it was crash and he went with his spin attack as he ran through rocket. Second was coco doing a tornado kick to rocket and last but not least crunch, running tours him and punching him through his chest. Causing him to spark and exploded. All that was left of him was a pile of his broken body in pieces.
The bandicoots are glad that they sear the last of kooler and rocket. Then the ground was shaking and they thought it was an earthquake until they look up and there jaws drop as they see nothing like this before. a GIANT KOOLER!
that impossible! Machines cant just grow in minutes and he was disable coco pointed out. well I think these can grow crunch said to coco, crash just steered at the giant with fear. hey! What that on his hand crunch said pointing to the right hand. It jump from giant kooler hand and landed in front of the destroyed rocket. He introduce himself to the bandicoot I am Sunflower and I was created to raise the stacks in fights like this one then he turn to the once functioning rocket and fired a ray from the tank like on his back and the monster was first rebuild and then grew roughly the same height as kooler bigger is better giant rocket shouted and giant kooler agreed you got that right. the sunflower android open a portal to the machine base on the moon with just his finger and went through the portal and the portal vanish while crash, coco and crunch have to try and defeat two giant android but the kooler and rocket has other plans.
They decided to crush crosser dog and destroy what left of motor world.
The trio bandicoots didnt know what to do until their wristbands glow and out of nowhere, three giant machine vehicles that has figures of dragons.
Crunch pick up his walkie talkie and heard unknown said how do you like you dragons mechs? before they could replied, the serpent dragon fired laser beams at kooler and rocket.
The large dragon gone and done a rockslide on them two too and the Walsh dragon head butted them cause both of them some damage. their amazing. Just what we needed coco said down the walkie talkie and unknown also said to them know these are your dragons mechs. Crash, you got the serpent dragon mech, coco you got the ice/fire Walsh dragon mech and crunch you got the mighty earth dragon mech. Know press the red button that next to the glowing button. they press the red button and was teleported inside there own dragons mechs and they fought the giant kooler and giant rocket. The mechs hold their own until kooler open his mouth and kind of froze the dragons mechs and were damage from kooler fog and unknown said to them you lot must take off your wristband and place in a slot that the same shape as your wristband. Know when that is in place, you three must press the glowing button to see what these dragons can do. they follow unknown instruction and by all three surprise, the dragons started to combine with each other. First crunch earth dragon turn into a body with legs, coco Walsh dragon turn into arms and attach to the crunch dragon mech and crash dragon mech de and reattach on the back of crunch mech and became the mech wings and fist came out of crash mech and attach to coco mech and the head of crunch mech turn and show the true head and the three dragon mechs had form the Mega Dragon Mech. crash, coco and crunch were more then amaze about this.
Kooler and Rocket wasnt impress with the bandicoots mech. Kooler ran tours the mega dragon mech and swing with his axe into it but, the mech punch the axe when it was close enough so hard it broke off it handle and didnt scratch the mech fist.


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Then it punch kooler twice with both fist and kick him, causing him to fly back. Rocket fired a shower of missiles at the mech but the twin guns on the mega dragon mech arms and used the arm with frost arm and froze all of the missiles stiff and they landed on the ground and didnt went off. Then used the fire arm and melted the frosted missiles and they still didnt went off.
The mech then ram into rocket which caused him to fly back. Kooler came charging at the mech and he planning to slice the mech with it cold, metal claws but the dragon did a tail whip and at the end of its tail was a long blade which slash through kooler which he sparked and fell backwards and exploded. Rocket got back up and sear kooler destruction and decided to fire a large bomb. The dragon mech used both and fired a mix of ice and fire beam which hit rocket, cause a chain reaction inside of him and exploded while standing and didnt got the chance to fire his bomb.
They were amaze of their mech and decided to go and use it to crush Viruse at Motor World.
Back at what left of motor world, crosser dog and grimlock were suffering through they injuries and dont have much more to dish out except c.d. he decided to use his sword and power it up and then slash through grimlock body a few time and watch him fall and blown up. Crosser dog then fell on one knee with exhaustion from the fight from grimlock. Viruse was watching the whole battle and threw down a dark gear on the blown up android.
Crosser dog notice the dark gear and self-destructed when made contact with the dead grimlock and the next thing he sear is a revive and grown grimlock. your in trouble know the giant said to the tired crosser dog. Viruse is about to be rid of c.d for good but then he heard giant footsteps and he thought is was rocket and kooler and turn around and was not inspection what he just sear. A giant mech that is control by crash, coco and crunch. grimlock! forget about crosser dog and attack the mech that coming this way Viruse told grimlock and he follow his master orders and went to meet up with the mech. The bandicoots were near the park and sear grimlock but as a giant and they were confuse. how did he got as big as those other two? coco said and grimlock ram into the dragon mech and force it to take a few steps back from the impact. What wrong with you, turkey?! crunch shouted through his microphone to grimlock actions. everyone listen. Grimlock got infected by Viruse virus. I already defeated him once but then a black gear come out of nowhere and made him grow. you must destroy him c.d said through his walkie talkie to all of the bandicoots walkie talkie. That put their confuse minds to rest but still had to destroy grimlock. He came at the mech and try to punch right it but block and got punch right at the skull mark and on sparks during the mech counter punch and fell backwards.
When grimlock got back up, the dragon mech slam his fist right on one of grimlock gears and their were sparks when damage which really hurt him. They gang found his weak points and try to damage the other gear but grimlock fired energy beams from his star on his helmet which damage the dragon mech a little. The mega dragon mech use it twin cannons and fired at grimlock other gear which leaves him powerless against the dragon mech. Coco and crunch were thinking of how to finish him off . Unknown send them one last instruction on how to finish battles like these. Coco read it out loud to crash and crunch to finish off giant monsters, press the button that has a sword on. crash press the button and the tail on his mech came off and went in the arms of the mega dragon mech and was a form of a sword.
The sword power up and was ready to finish off grimlock and the mech took flight and came down like a meteorite to grimlock and SLASH! The sword struck through grimlock body leaving a sparking line, the mech landed back on the ground and grimlock fell due to the slash NOOOOOOOOO and then exploded. Crash, coco and crunch celebrated while crosser dog who watch from the same spot that Viruse spotted the mega dragon mech, is impress and happy for his friends then crosser dog a voice whisper in his head and turn around to see who that was but no body was around. okthat was weird he said to himself. you cant denied that we are alike he heard that same whispering voice and quickly turn around again and sear nobody and this kind of thing was freaking him out a bit and turn to the mega dragon mech and it gave him a thumps up and he smile and he gave them the thumps up back. Shortly after the giant fight, the mech went back into their hiding place and crash and crunch are finding the remaining of von clutch body parts and crunch radio unknown to help rebuild von clutch and coco is checking her laptop to see how much damage crosser dog suffer during his fight with the now dead grimlock and crosser dog is repairing himself from the his fight. Unknown came to whats left of motor world and revive him. what had happen to my beloved park? von clutch said in shock when the first thing he sear when he was revive was a totaled theme park. I was my fault, I had to fight the evil grimlock or you wouldnt see the remaining of your life long dream. And yes I will send my builder cogs to rebuild your park right away crosser dog said to von clutch and soon the builder cogs came and started on the repairs and crash, coco, crunch, c.d went back to sanity island except unknown, he went back to his base.
At the machine empire fortress that is on the moon, Viruse watch the record battle of the mega dragon mech vs. Rocket, Kooler and grimlock. I cant believe that not only I have to revive those three but I have to be ride of those three bandicoots and crosser dog. cortex and n gin came into the throne room and gave Viruse three power crystals for the lost he had suffer. Viruse used his hand to magnetize the three power crystals to his hand and look at it and came up with a plan and started to laugh evilly.

The End.

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